Time to get serious!!

So this is something for a children story, and this is going to be the art style, im still not sure about the layout, but i have a few idears ;-) - What do you thing ?

Children comic, page 1.

Hi,

This is the first page of a children comic, yhat i am working on, but sometimes i wonder if I am good enough.

I might try with some colours, or let my wife do it ! - I am not sure what to do yet!!

Children comic

Hi,

This is from a children comic, I am trying to make, and its the start/top of the first page. Just to show something ;-) - But if you do see this, please leave a comment about it, and let me know what you are thinking !!